He sat at the street corner. Smiling at the passers by. Even strangers. He had a knack of making people talk. From the local sweeper to the owner of the Mercedes, he listened.
One could guess how varied his friend circle was by the huge turn out at his funeral.
Drunk and driving. Crushed skull. Death.
Prompted at : 3WW
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Hmmmm... I am thinkin wat to comment.. but not able to come up with somethin... its nice... but its not strong... :(
The twist at the end works really well...
if there was no drink & Drive, it would have been about me :P
Oh dear, why sad ending. Very nice one.
The twist was really interesting..
An interesting twist. And a good start for a 55 Fiction.
You made me feel sad. You made me FEEL!Its a success:-)
Pls...let more of this come!
Ha ha. This is a good one, though violent!!
Keep Blogging!
Thoorika, ah I guess I will try to b better the next time :)
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anoop I know :D :D
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Sudharm what a quaint name! lovely! and thank you for dropping by
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Archy ! *hugs* you are a chum!
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Good piece of writing!!